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6th-Oct-2005 10:15 pm - Rising From The Deeps
Sacrifice: Tree

MandelshtamTo read only children's books, treasure
Only childish thoughts, throw
Grown-up things away
And rise from deep sorrows.

I'm tired to death of life,
I accept nothing it can give me,
But I love my poor earth
Because it's the only one I've seen.

In a far-off garden I swung
On a simple wooden swing,
And I remember dark tall firs
In a hazy fever.

—Osip Mandelshtam
[trans. James Green]
(4) 1908

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16th-Sep-2005 09:36 pm - A Review: Hunting and Gathering Heaven
Sacrifice: Tree

Poems by David Athey

  • Paperback: 58 pages
  • Publisher: Bellowing Ark Press, Shoreline, WA, 2000
  • ISBN: 0944920373
  • To order the book contact David directly at davidathey@hotmail.com

Hunting and Gathering Heaven is a thin little book. It is light. Light in weight, obviously, and light in tone. But more significantly, it is light in the sense of being luminous.

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19th-Jan-2005 12:55 pm - A Slowly Passing Thing...
Mirror: Natalya
She whispered with a tinkling silver breath -- the moisture condensed to fog and lay low on my heart. "It is not always as you fear... do not raise the shadows." The shadows. Plato's cave. A fire behind our eyes giving voice and echo to what can never be known.
19th-Jan-2005 11:29 am - Pablo Neruda: Some Beasts
Rublev: Horse

I've just recently (re)began reading the selection of Pablo Neruda's verse in translation titled Full Woman, Fleshly Apple, Hot Moon. I find myself quite seduced by the mature yet childlike earthy-sensuality of these poems. Here's the first one in the book as translated by Stephen Mitchell.

Some Beasts

It was the twilight of the iguana.

From the rainbow-arched battlements
his tongue like a dart
plunged into the greenness
the monastic ant-swarm walked
through the jungle with melodious feet,
the guanaco, thin as oxygen
in the wide gray heights,
moved wearing boots of gold,
while the llama opened his guileless
eyes in the transparency
of a world filled with dew.
The monkeys braided a thread
endlessly erotic
along the shores of the dawn,
demolishing walls of pollen
and scaring off the violet flight
of the butterflies of Muzo.
It was the night of the alligators,
the night pure and pullulating
with snouts emerging from the slime,
and out of the sleepy marshes
an opaque noise of armor
returned to the earth it came from.

The jaguar touched the leaves
with his phosphorescent absence,
th puma runs on the branches
like a devouring fire
while inside him burn
the jungle's alcoholic eyes.

The badgers scratch the feet
of the river, sniff out the nest
whose throbbing delight
they'll attack with red teeth.

And in the depths of the all-powerful water,
like the circle of the earth,
lies the giant anaconda,
covered with ritual mud,
devouring and religious.

13th-Jan-2003 12:12 pm - A second draft of The old days...
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The old days are almost forgotten:
With mechanical precision
The planets obey their orbits—
No longer are they gods overwrought
With immortal human lusts, and so
Moon no longer runs from the sun;
No longer does she run as from
An ardently seeking lover.
Still, though, the moon washes over us
As she bathes us with her silver light,
And still it seems she sorrows when
She falls from the blood-red sky.




Not a final draft, by any means, but just feeling it out.
11th-Jan-2003 06:44 pm - Poem
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The old days are forever gone:
The moon no longer runs from the sun;
The planets obey their orbits
With mechanical precision—
No longer are they gods overwrought.
Still, though, the moon washes over us,
As she bathes us with her silver light.
5th-Jan-2003 05:57 pm - 4 Poems
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The blue heron
At the edge of the grey-lipped pond
In silence—
You pass by withdrawn
In silence as at night.



One leg updrawn
Into thick feathered warmth,
Silently standing—
Eyes set against the sky
With barely noticed trembling.



Branches dance
With an unseen partner—
Your breath,
Warm and moist on my
Neck as you sleep.



Three crows
Black against the green
Slash pine—
Solitary against the blue
And purple evening sky.
2nd-Jan-2003 10:49 pm - A First Attempt at Modern Waka
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[profile] cranehaven pointed me to a group that works with the modern waka form, relative to the tanka, haiku, etc. Tonight I composed my first poem of this sort.

An owl descending
From above the nocturnal pond:
The waning moon,
Robed in silver mist,
Finds a sleeping fieldmouse.

It seems the waka form may be valuable in developing a personal aesthetic which is both organic and kenotic, and perhaps even mystical. As I explore this form more, I will share my thoughts.

That's all for now.
31st-Dec-2002 10:53 am - Storms-ending poems
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lj user cranehaven posted some wonderful lines which begin After the storm. Please by all means read them.

Here’s something I wrote some years ago:

Emergence

The storm is over,
The air still smells of rain.
And as I look out from the cave
I can see the glow of dawn
Climbing its way into the sky,
Turning the clouds pink and silver and gold.
And as I walk out of the cave,
And out into the land,
I see in the distance
A human form laying lifeless
Among the brackets and brambles.

Something familiar about the body;
I can’t yet make it out.
Something familiar about the thought,
The feeling of lifelessness…

But the thought passes,
And I am enwrapped in the glory
Of this new day:
The silence, the life after the storm.
Everything I see: a silent prayer
To life, to God, to wonder,
Enraptured by the sensation of light
Sparkling in the drops of rain in the leaves.


As is apparent, not much work went into the form, but the thought behind it is one I still quite like—something which I try to keep in memory to establish perspective.
29th-Dec-2002 12:31 am - A Confession to a Friend in Trouble
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Thomas HardyA Confession to a Friend in Trouble


Your troubles shrink not, though I feel them less
Here, far away, than when I tarried near;
I even smile old smiles—with listlessness—
Yet smiles they are, not ghastly mockeries mere.

A thought too strange to house within my brain
Haunting its outer precincts I discern:
—That I will not show zeal again to learn
Your griefs, and, sharing them, renew my pain…


It goes, like murky bird or buccaneer
That shapes its lawless figure on the main,
And staunchness tends to banish utterly
The unseemly instinct that had lodgment here;
Yet, comrade old, can bitterer knowledge be
Than that, though banned, such instinct was in me!

–1866
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